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Start is good, i love anything that starts with a piano although i find it has poor EQ. When the drums kick in, they don't drown it out and the mixing of the drums is pretty much perfect. The kick has a lovely punch to it.
When the arp/pluck starts at 0:16 it drowns out the piano and wasn't a good choice of instrument, something a bit more subtle would have added depth and given the song a chance to build. I'm afraid from here it get's too muddy as far as mixing goes which is quite poor.
The song just then starts unexpectedly losing instruments before starting with the piano and pluck again.
Structure is poor, instrument choice was good but could have been better. Drums were well mixed.
3/5